Copywriting Tips to Make More Money Online

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Back in November I set my ego aside and asked you all to critique my sales copy for

You guys ripped it apart, and I followed up by TAKING ACTION (the key to success!) by making a lot of changes to the site. I ended up relaunching the site this week and did another 51 sales.

That’s over $10K – all thanks to you!

I really appreciate your help.

The 3 big things I did to the site were to…

1) Add video to the sales copy

2) Put “order buttons” up higher in the copy.

3) Add more images of the product.

I still need to go back and add a payment plan (once you get over $100 in the fitness world, you’ll need a payment plan!). And I need to re-write some of the copy to take the emphasis off of “me” and talk more about the reader’s problems.

But so far, so good!

That’s the power of the Mastermind at work.

Don’t miss out on your chance to have your site and business helped out by a Mastermind Group. It will change your life.

I can’t thank you guys enough,

Craig Ballantyne, CSCS, MS

PS – I’d love to see you in New Jersey for the 2009 OSP Entourage Syndicate Marketing small group seminar and hotseat event in New Jersey on March 12 and 13th.

You’ll get my latest traffic strategies, time management secrets that allow me to get a huge amount of work done while traveling the world, and the power of the Mastermind when you hit the hotseat.

Plus, you’ll get Zach Even-Esh to whip you into a frenzy with his “Kill It” marketing message. You’re going to leave that event so jacked up and ready to succeed, we’ll have to hold you back from running through the walls.

Visit this webpage to grab your spot:


Only 3 spots remain to get started at the discount seminar investment.

Listen to what Kettlebell expert Brad Nelson and nutrition expert Brad Pilon had to say about the last OSP Entourage Marketing Seminar.

“I was just at Craig Ballantyne’s OSP seminar and I came in really confused, really not sure what to do because there is so much info out there and he really just put it all together for me. My new product is going to be out and I fully expect it to go from making four figures in
a year on my online business to bringing that up to six figures.

“I came here with no product, really no idea, no niche and left with all three, tons of ideas, and also really good content on sales copy and how to write it. I’m going back and I know I’ll have a product within the next three months.”
Brad Nelson

“You hit a homerun with the Entourage Marketing System. You’ve changed the way I view online marketing and I’m sure it’s going to change the way people perceive my product and me.”
Brad Pilon,

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